Whisper in the wind- Part 1
Written by Max, edited by YumiOfTheFadedTsunami (Fate)
I stared up at the sky from my perch on one of the forest‘s pine trees. I loved the way the wind was running through my long golden brown hair. The moon was bright tonight. Everything was quiet, not a sound could be heard, in the forest I call home, excluding the far-off sounds of my family laughing and enjoying the night together. My name's Maximum Ride, call me Max please! My family and I aren’t normal. To be honest, we are very amazing, not to sound to full of ourselves or anything like that.
"Max!" I heard Kana, the eldest of my sisters, call from the forest floor. I looked down from my branch only to see her waving at me excitedly. Her blonde hair began to blow in her face from the wind and she comically attempted to get it away from her face and wave at the same time. I felt a smile meet my lips. Kana is hardly what you could define as “one who acts their age”. Kana is seventeen, a whopping two years older than myself. Despite her age, she is probably the most childish of the entire family.
"Come on, Twinnie! It's time for bed!" she chimed playfully, her blue eyes glowing with mirth and childishness. That's right, she calls me “Twinnie”. Some of you may laugh at that, but it fits our relationship to me. We are, after all, like twins, except for a few small differences.
"Coming, Kana!" I got to my feet, and before I could chicken out, I jumped. First came the cool feeling of the wind rushing through my hair. Then the deafening sound of the wind followed afterwards. I was twenty feet from the ground, when I snapped open my wings. That's right, wings. I am a genetically mutated freak! Welcome to my world. I have a thirteen foot wingspan baby! My wings are jet black in color. The dark color of my feathers make my hair appear to be a gold shade.
I landed on the ground beside Kana without a sound. I tucked my wings in neatly behind my back. Now that I was beside Kana I could see her in extreme detail. Her head was topped with a pair of pointed red ears that were covered in a plush-like fur. She tilted her head at my innocently, and her similarly colored bushy tail added to the movement by smoothly dancing behind her. Oh, yes, I forgot to mention that Kana is part fox. So sorry.
"Do we really need to go to bed this early?" I asked lamely.
"Yup!" she said in her childish sing-song voice. "Come on!" she said, grabbing my wrist and pulling me along behind her.
"Be gentle with me!" She pulled me around some bushes, through some creeks, And then BAM! We were home. Our family, Kasey, Fate, Souma, and Kat were all waiting for us. I got nervous when I felt the glare of piecing red eyes in my direction.
"It's about time, Max! Why'd you run off on us?" Fate questioned me in her usual stern manner, but her face appeared gentle and understanding, so I knew I wasn’t in too much trouble. The small blonde was so much younger than the rest of us, but was surprisingly the most motherly. It always made me wonder about what hardships she had faced before she joined our family. I shrugged in the most nonchalant manner I could muster.
"I just had to fly solo for awhile..." I answered quietly. "Well don't run off without telling us! We were worried about you!" Kat said smiling goofily. Then she punched me lightly on the shoulder in her usual teasing way.
"Sorry." I replied smiling.
"Remember to tell us that you need time alone next time, Max. Okay?" Fate asked with a smile, unknowingly showing off her sharp canines.
"Okay, Omega!" I teased.
"Don't call me Omega!" she said with a disappointed pout. I didn’t know what Omega meant, but I knew she hated it at least, and that was all that mattered when it came to teasing the normally stern and mature ten-year old. I discreetly glanced around and noticed that Kasey sat quietly on a boulder a few yards away, probably trying to keep her distance from our little wolf out of instinct. She was licking her hand like she was getting ready for a cat bath, though she was still watching us intently. Her whole body was layered with onyx stripes, while the rest of her skin contrasted greatly in color, with almost a paper white pigment.
"Could you not do that?" I asked. "It's disturbing to watch Kass..." I said, feeling a bit wide-eyed. Kasey turned a bit pink in the cheeks and smiled sheepishly she meowed, giving me an apologetic look.
"Can we go to bed now? I'm sleepy!" Souma, the second youngest member of our family, and Kat's younger sister by birth, whined loudly, the stretched and made a silent yawn. Kat glomped the poor girl and began to tease her. Despite Kat’s teasing, Kat herself began to yawn mid-tease and her bunny ears began to droop over her eyes. Kat made an effort to pretend she was wide awake. It was obvious though, that she was being a hypocrite and was tired as well.
"Okay, okay!" Fate laughed wolfishly and herded everyone toward the edge of the woods. Everyone gathered moss and leaves for their bedding, and quickly began to settle down. Fate wandered away from the woods once everyone was settled. She laid down on some rocks near the still burning fire, almost too close to the flames for a normal person. Then again, nothing was really normal for this family.
"Night, Twinnie!" Kana called out. I smiled and walked over to hug her.
"Night, Twinnie." I whispered back as I pulled away. I then slowly opened my wings as I kicked off the ground hard. I soared up into the cool night air. I settled down on a tree branch that looked like it was strong enough to support me. Life was set for me. I had everything I could ever want or need. So explain to me, why was it I felt like I was in danger?
Written by Max, edited by YumiOfTheFadedTsunami (Fate)
I stared up at the sky from my perch on one of the forest‘s pine trees. I loved the way the wind was running through my long golden brown hair. The moon was bright tonight. Everything was quiet, not a sound could be heard, in the forest I call home, excluding the far-off sounds of my family laughing and enjoying the night together. My name's Maximum Ride, call me Max please! My family and I aren’t normal. To be honest, we are very amazing, not to sound to full of ourselves or anything like that.
"Max!" I heard Kana, the eldest of my sisters, call from the forest floor. I looked down from my branch only to see her waving at me excitedly. Her blonde hair began to blow in her face from the wind and she comically attempted to get it away from her face and wave at the same time. I felt a smile meet my lips. Kana is hardly what you could define as “one who acts their age”. Kana is seventeen, a whopping two years older than myself. Despite her age, she is probably the most childish of the entire family.
"Come on, Twinnie! It's time for bed!" she chimed playfully, her blue eyes glowing with mirth and childishness. That's right, she calls me “Twinnie”. Some of you may laugh at that, but it fits our relationship to me. We are, after all, like twins, except for a few small differences.
"Coming, Kana!" I got to my feet, and before I could chicken out, I jumped. First came the cool feeling of the wind rushing through my hair. Then the deafening sound of the wind followed afterwards. I was twenty feet from the ground, when I snapped open my wings. That's right, wings. I am a genetically mutated freak! Welcome to my world. I have a thirteen foot wingspan baby! My wings are jet black in color. The dark color of my feathers make my hair appear to be a gold shade.
I landed on the ground beside Kana without a sound. I tucked my wings in neatly behind my back. Now that I was beside Kana I could see her in extreme detail. Her head was topped with a pair of pointed red ears that were covered in a plush-like fur. She tilted her head at my innocently, and her similarly colored bushy tail added to the movement by smoothly dancing behind her. Oh, yes, I forgot to mention that Kana is part fox. So sorry.
"Do we really need to go to bed this early?" I asked lamely.
"Yup!" she said in her childish sing-song voice. "Come on!" she said, grabbing my wrist and pulling me along behind her.
"Be gentle with me!" She pulled me around some bushes, through some creeks, And then BAM! We were home. Our family, Kasey, Fate, Souma, and Kat were all waiting for us. I got nervous when I felt the glare of piecing red eyes in my direction.
"It's about time, Max! Why'd you run off on us?" Fate questioned me in her usual stern manner, but her face appeared gentle and understanding, so I knew I wasn’t in too much trouble. The small blonde was so much younger than the rest of us, but was surprisingly the most motherly. It always made me wonder about what hardships she had faced before she joined our family. I shrugged in the most nonchalant manner I could muster.
"I just had to fly solo for awhile..." I answered quietly. "Well don't run off without telling us! We were worried about you!" Kat said smiling goofily. Then she punched me lightly on the shoulder in her usual teasing way.
"Sorry." I replied smiling.
"Remember to tell us that you need time alone next time, Max. Okay?" Fate asked with a smile, unknowingly showing off her sharp canines.
"Okay, Omega!" I teased.
"Don't call me Omega!" she said with a disappointed pout. I didn’t know what Omega meant, but I knew she hated it at least, and that was all that mattered when it came to teasing the normally stern and mature ten-year old. I discreetly glanced around and noticed that Kasey sat quietly on a boulder a few yards away, probably trying to keep her distance from our little wolf out of instinct. She was licking her hand like she was getting ready for a cat bath, though she was still watching us intently. Her whole body was layered with onyx stripes, while the rest of her skin contrasted greatly in color, with almost a paper white pigment.
"Could you not do that?" I asked. "It's disturbing to watch Kass..." I said, feeling a bit wide-eyed. Kasey turned a bit pink in the cheeks and smiled sheepishly she meowed, giving me an apologetic look.
"Can we go to bed now? I'm sleepy!" Souma, the second youngest member of our family, and Kat's younger sister by birth, whined loudly, the stretched and made a silent yawn. Kat glomped the poor girl and began to tease her. Despite Kat’s teasing, Kat herself began to yawn mid-tease and her bunny ears began to droop over her eyes. Kat made an effort to pretend she was wide awake. It was obvious though, that she was being a hypocrite and was tired as well.
"Okay, okay!" Fate laughed wolfishly and herded everyone toward the edge of the woods. Everyone gathered moss and leaves for their bedding, and quickly began to settle down. Fate wandered away from the woods once everyone was settled. She laid down on some rocks near the still burning fire, almost too close to the flames for a normal person. Then again, nothing was really normal for this family.
"Night, Twinnie!" Kana called out. I smiled and walked over to hug her.
"Night, Twinnie." I whispered back as I pulled away. I then slowly opened my wings as I kicked off the ground hard. I soared up into the cool night air. I settled down on a tree branch that looked like it was strong enough to support me. Life was set for me. I had everything I could ever want or need. So explain to me, why was it I felt like I was in danger?
Last edited by Max on Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:57 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Fate was being an editor :P)