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    Post  XxWaterFlowerxX Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:55 am

    This was written in 2008. I've gotten WAY better than this. XD This is.. utter fail. THIS THREAD IS FAIL. ^-^

    Okay. Just a warning... Ash and Misty are VERY OOC in this. XDDD Especially Misty. Misty ish OOC. Very, very OOC. ^^;


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    As they watched the sun set over the horizon, sitting side by side, she stealthily stole a glance at the boy beside her.

    'He's so beautiful. They way his hair falls over his eyes... his beautiful, brown eyes.' She thought.

    As if feeling her gaze on him, the boy turned to look at her.

    She looked away quickly, a blush slowly creeping up on her cheeks.

    The boy looked at her curiously, but decided it wasn't important and went back to watching the sunset.

    'That was too close. I need to stop doing that.'

    Despite telling herself not too, she looked anyway. 'What is it about him, that makes me feel so...'

    "You know," He said suddenly, turning to look at her again. "It's not polite to stare."

    She grimaced inwardly. 'Stupid. Stupid, stupid! I just had to stare at him, didn't I.'

    "S-sorry." She said quietly.

    'Why was she looking at me like that? The look in her eyes... I've never seen her, or anyone look at me like that.'

    He didn't say anything, but looked straight ahead.

    She followed his gaze back to the sun. It was almost completely set.

    'It's almost time.' She thought to herself. She was suddenly overcome by the feeling of butterflies in her stomach. 'I can do this.'

    She took a deep breath. "A-Ash," Her voice squeaked. 'Damn it!'

    "Yeah, Misty?"

    "I... Okay. I'm just going to come out and say it..."

    He waited.

    "We've been friends for a long time... a really long time..." She started.

    "Yeah, we have. It's been so long since the day we met. When you fished me out of the river." He laughed.

    "Y-yeah," She forced a smile. "A-and, I... your my best friend, you know."

    "And you're mine!"

    "Mmmhhmm... And I... ever since we were ten, I've always used my bike as an excuse to travel with you. And it was... at the beginning. But..." She trailed off. She couldn't look at him. So she turned and faced the sun set. She looked anywhere but him.

    "But...?" He asked patiently.

    "B-but... after awhile, I forgot all about my bike. I-I... I s-started to..." She took deep, slow breaths, trying to calm herself. 'It shouldn't be this hard. Why, oh why, does this have to be so hard?'

    "You started to what, Misty? ...Misty? Misty!" Ash cried out in alarm.

    She was crying.

    Tears streaming freely down her face, she continued, completely unfazed. "I started to..."

    The sun had set.

    She turned to face him; She was ready.

    "I started to love you." She said quietly.


    ~♥~

    TOLD YAH. MISTY [and Ash] are OOC. XDDD MISTY WOULD NOT CRY. ..Nor would she admit she loved him. XD And Ash would never be PATIENT. My god. what was I THINKING?
    Also, I have learned from the A/N I put in the word document this was in, that I wrote it while listening to 'At The Beginning' from the movie Anastacia (sp?).
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    Post  SensationalRunt Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:57 am

    It's not THAT OOC. xD ❤
    Just... Misty bursting into tears was random.
    I liked it. (:
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    Post  XxWaterFlowerxX Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:10 am

    SensationalRunt wrote:It's not THAT OOC. xD ❤
    Just... Misty bursting into tears was random.
    I liked it. (:

    Oh PLEASE, Kat. :roll: it is VERY OOC, and you know it. XD Stop trying to be nice. XD I'M A BIG GIRL. I CAN HANDLE THE TRUTH. :P
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    Post  SensationalRunt Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:53 am

    I've seen much worse, Kana. xD
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    Post  XxWaterFlowerxX Fri Sep 03, 2010 10:03 am

    SensationalRunt wrote:I've seen much worse, Kana. xD

    ..True dat. :P But its still pretty horrible. You have to admit. :P
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    Post  SensationalRunt Fri Sep 03, 2010 10:06 am

    XxWaterFlowerxX wrote:
    SensationalRunt wrote:I've seen much worse, Kana. xD

    ..True dat. :P But its still pretty horrible. You have to admit. :P

    You have no confidence in your writing, missy. xD It's definitely not HORRIBLE. It's not the best thing I've ever read, but it's pretty decent. :)
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    Post  xXSoumaSanXx Fri Sep 03, 2010 10:08 am

    SensationalRunt wrote:I've seen much worse, Kana. xD

    So have I, so have I...
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    Post  xXArisuNeeXx Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:25 pm

    I wish I wrote this good x3

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